I do appreciate the careful work you do in responding to my essays, and I was also pleasantly surprised to discover how much you know about neuroscience after visiting your academia.edu page. Neurophilosophy is the primary thing I do as a philosopher, and I would be interested in hearing your responses to my writing on that topic on my academia page. https://sonoma.academia.edu/TeedRockwell Almost all of my papers rely on neuroscience to some degree, but I know relatively little of the science and a lot about it's philosophical implications. It's a tricky business balancing the two, so it's always good to get more info from the science when I can.
That being said, I think you read this particular paper a bit carelessly. I'll be commenting on it by underlying and responding to key passages in your comments.